Comments for Biography of an Archmage http://boa.emeraldfyre.com A serial novel of magic, adventure, and a guy named Kyle. Tue, 07 Feb 2012 09:47:13 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.7.1 hourly 1 Comment on Prolog Part 1 by Aaron Blake http://boa.emeraldfyre.com/novel/prolog-part-1/comment-page-1#comment-363 Aaron Blake Tue, 04 Oct 2011 03:08:33 +0000 http://boa.emeraldfyre.com/?p=3#comment-363 This is a good beginning! It is full of promise, history and struggle. I look forward to reading more. There are a few times that your sentences run long, and you could make it an easier read by splitting those sentences up. This is a good beginning! It is full of promise, history and struggle. I look forward to reading more. There are a few times that your sentences run long, and you could make it an easier read by splitting those sentences up.

]]> Comment on Chapter 12 by Angela http://boa.emeraldfyre.com/novel/chapter-12/comment-page-1#comment-52 Angela Fri, 08 Jan 2010 03:38:46 +0000 http://boa.emeraldfyre.com/?p=74#comment-52 I did not realize you had updated but this story seems to be getting better as it goes along. I did not realize you had updated but this story seems to be getting better as it goes along.

]]> Comment on Chapter 12 by Jonas Blake http://boa.emeraldfyre.com/novel/chapter-12/comment-page-1#comment-41 Jonas Blake Sat, 21 Nov 2009 22:23:22 +0000 http://boa.emeraldfyre.com/?p=74#comment-41 Fixed. Thanks! Fixed. Thanks!

]]> Comment on Chapter 12 by Shoshanah http://boa.emeraldfyre.com/novel/chapter-12/comment-page-1#comment-37 Shoshanah Tue, 27 Oct 2009 02:32:14 +0000 http://boa.emeraldfyre.com/?p=74#comment-37 "we need to be fairly quite" should be quiet. Also, *poke* write more! “we need to be fairly quite” should be quiet.

Also, *poke* write more!

]]> Comment on Chapter 11 by Shoshanah http://boa.emeraldfyre.com/novel/chapter-11/comment-page-1#comment-34 Shoshanah Fri, 16 Oct 2009 21:08:36 +0000 http://boa.emeraldfyre.com/?p=70#comment-34 But...where's the next chapter? You've got my attention now. But…where’s the next chapter? You’ve got my attention now.

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